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Saturday, 01 January 2005

New Year Haiku

Andrew tells us there is a tradition of writing a 'positive' haiku on the first day of the year.  His is here, and Jill has joined in here.  Mine is below; if you would like to add yours to the comments, I'll bring it up for a New Year's poem dance.

frozen garden --
     scattered on snow
          seed for the birds

_snowflakes

from  Sarpy Sam:

Seasons turn around
  Sun,snow streaks the air abound
    Friends, like grass arise

snowflake

from  mjones:

Voice flutes from below,
shutting out the wind. I think:
He'll be four this year.

snowflake

from  whiskey:

Resolutions? No.
I have promises to keep
and miles, miles to go.

snowflake

from   Alice:

the past is written
clean new page, fresh ink to write
what comes after this

snowflake

from  Ken:

Cymbals bright and pure
Bounce off players singing horns
Musicians' New Year

snowflake

from   Dave:

this one; and

To what shall I liken
this New Year's, warm and brown?
It happens, that's all.

 

snowflake

from   Cathy:

New day-
leave the paper

white

snowflake

from  Cindy:

Nearly flash-frozen
on the beach: north wind gusts down
Gastineau Channel.

snowflake

from   jenett:

Come in from the rain
Reinvent and try again
New without the pain

snowflake

   

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Seasons turn around
Sun,snow streaks the air abound
Friends, like grass arise

Voice flutes from below,
shutting out the wind. I think:
He'll be four this year.

Resolutions? No.
I have promises to keep
and miles, miles to go.


[ok, liberties with Robert Frost's "Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening", but, it's still true.]

the past is written
clean new page, fresh ink to write
what comes after this

Cymbals bright and pure
Bounce off players singing horns
Musicians' New Year

http://neithernor.blogspot.com/2005/01/not-haiku.html

(Not a haiku, and not current, but the will to participate - however ineptly - was there.)

O.K., this just came to me. Brace yerselves...

To what shall I liken
this New Year's, warm and brown?
It happens, that's all.

Oh good I found mine, buried in the junk of my desk.

New day-
leave the paper

white


Nearly flash-frozen
on the beach: north wind gusts down
Gastineau Channel.

Come in from the rain
Reinvent and try again
New without the pain

so kay the first one are good not really haiku some of them not meaningful and too much error

Thank you for visiting, and I hope you will contribute to this year's haiku dance.

However, please note that this is not a literary exercise, but a FUN exercise. Not all the contributors are poets.

Everyone is invited to play -- and no critiques are allowed on these collaborative posts.

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