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04 March 2006

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Anne

Beautiful, both. Though i prefer, i think, this later one.

What a wonderous gift it must be, dropping words from deep recesses and have them pool in someone else's heart.

Laura

I love this! I like this version better than the older, but both are lovely - what you've done with the line breaks and rhythms here goes beautifully with the images, the feel, I think. "Balks" at the end of a line, so that the poem seems to also balk for a moment, is wonderful.

Ken

So much, in so few words.

Like a song, with exquisite phrasing.

SB

Such encouragement -- food to me.

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