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10 August 2006


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LOVE that last line! Very nice.


I love these lines:

I make a nest in my hands of torn
cloth, and a bird settles into it.


I particularly like the lines Lynn mentioned, and I like the overall feeling of Haiku...something about the imagery and the rhythm of the last two lines.


I must join the chorus love the imagery of the nest in my hands


I can't analyze the impact of this poem on me. I only know it touches a deep place. Speaks to my heart.


this is incredibly moving. the imagery is so sharp and poignant.

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