Poem Dance!

We have the beginning of a poem dance. This is the one I posted yesterday:

at the end of winter
at the end of a warm day

dusty rain

and here is Niki's response:

after a day of sun
after working the garden
     sideways snow

from jenett:

in the heat of worry
in a storm of regret
  nothing changes

from Shelley:

under moss
under fallen leaves
forgotten acorns
 

before she left
before what passed for love —
who were you then?
 

from Paisley:

as the breath leaves
as the soul escapes
life begins

Next?

Comments

[jenett]

in the heat of worry
in a storm of regret
nothing changes

[Shelley]

under moss
under fallen leaves
forgotten acorns

[Shelley]

before she left
before what passed for love —
who were you then?

[paisley]

as the breath leaves
as the soul escapes
life begins...

can we post this on one of our blogs if we want to??? i have never done this before.... let me know....

[paisley]

as the breath leaves
as the soul escapes
life begins

i think i got spammed... let me try this again... can we post this to our own blog too????

[SB]

Yes, of course!

And, if you like, post a link to this to encourage other folks to come dance with us.

[paisley]

i went ahead and posted this over on just paisley.... i hope someone else will join in......

poem dance!