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laying the mind out
on a white sheet
sometimes in modest bedclothes
sometimes naked
flabby and flatulent
sometimes in a dark shroud
look at it there
pennies on the eyes
breasts nuzzling the armpits
waiting to be washed
My Work in Progress is not progressing, so I decided to start moving it over here.
Comments welcomed.
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I have to tell you how much I throughly enjoy coming to visit your blog. I gives me a sense of peace. Thank you.
PZ
Posted by: Pandora | 25 March 2004 at 10:09 PM
You are welcome!
Posted by: SB | 26 March 2004 at 09:56 AM
I want more detail about this mind as body idea. What's it smell like? What are the textures? What else is in the room? Who is looking at the body? Sounds like an autopsy. Was it murder, or an easeful death?
Posted by: Ivy | 26 March 2004 at 10:23 AM