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19 August 2004


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The year has entered its change,
sizzling one day, chilled the next.
Even the goldfish feel it, madly

Hmm my area has gone back to summer.(Yuck)Thoughly a great poem. last stanza took me be surprise. Great one.


Almost anyone can manage surprise. What's difficult is making the surprise seem also natural, following a sort of meta-logic, as you do here. Well done.
I guess none of these typepad sites actually "remember personal info" anymore. Bloody nuisance.

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