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29 September 2004

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Patia

I like it.

Or,

when you go
what is left?
-- only love

I suppose that's boring.

cindy

When he goes
what is left?
--dirty dishes

Roger Collett

when they go
what is left?
--tranquility

Cathy

This what I came up with

{yours}
When the Muse goes
what is left
–only autumn

And from there-
you’ll let the worries
fall with the leaves.
(my part)

Dave

[a punful experiment]

when the muse goes
what is left?
only autumn.
each morning the once-
free leaves of grass
made to rime
by frost.

patrick mcmanus

hi Sharon I enjoy all this -here's a try

only autumn
as you go
comes winter


patrick

Kalamity

When the muse goes
with the crows
what is left?
-- only autumn
cool weather,
leaves and feathers

mjones

Look, the tree is red!
Look!

My son is enraptured.

Autumn needs no muse.

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