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31 October 2004


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I surfed here through BlogExplosion and wanted to let you know that I like this poem a lot. I like the profusion of verbs, and my favorite lines are "The quilt/
exhales cedar and mothballs" and "My sheets pile up like snow." Lovely stuff.


The dog dozes while the cat
dreams of eating it, one black paw
at a time.

Hehehe that was unexpected line and a great one too.


Thank you both for taking the time to comment, and so thoughtfully, on this poem. Comments like this keep me writing.

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