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24 January 2005

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Anne

Faith and friendships and letting go. Such a small poem... such a lot to consider.

Didi

I love this poem.

LRDR

I loved this poem, I, who don't normaly enjoy them.

Cool.

LRDR

Cathy

Excellent poem, I to chuckle about the falling apart line. All my friendship in life have done that.

SaraS

I love this.

Aleah/Jane

Beautiful. Thanks for sharing this.

Dick Jones

This is wonderful - a triumph of compression & economy. Small but perfectly formed. Beautifully read too.

melly

Really neat to hear you read your own poem over the internet! Thank you!

fp

Good poem. Nicely rendered. Thanks.

h2

I don't know why you're so self-critical about this poem, except that every writer tends to be that way.

I think this poem is quite good. To me, it simply and concisely draws an image of doubting simply because we can't see a reason for assurance. It also does turn a nice observational phrase on friendships, but I think the thing I took from it was the reality that hope is often there, even when we can't see it.

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