Watermark: Snapshot 21 September 02005

21 September 2005

Snapshot 21 September 02005

bird cries lift me
from the shallow
surface of sleep

while i slept
flood walls broke
southern cities drowned

these northern hills
bleached tan
the maples turn

birches rustle
storms swirl
lifting the sea

south and north
autumn comes
north and south

the darkening

in Snapshot Poems 2005 | Permalink

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this is very nice!

Posted by: cindy | 21 September 2005 at 06:13 PM

This really is very special. Very deep. Almost silent.

Posted by: David | 22 September 2005 at 06:51 AM

Beautiful.

Posted by: Bitterroot | 22 September 2005 at 06:21 PM

Ah, it's soo wonderful to read your poems again.

Posted by: Cathy | 23 September 2005 at 06:02 PM

Intense vortex of a poem.

Posted by: Pearl | 26 September 2005 at 02:14 PM

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