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27 December 2005

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Sour Duck

Fantastic poem, *loved* the way you read it. Very very good on its own but the audio file provides that extra thrill. Well done.

It's not a big deal (? or maybe it is, to a poet, I don't know...) but the nouns in this line were switched:

"canaries and Java sparrows live kindly"

(You read "Java sparrows and canaries".)

Lovely. Going to listen to again.

SB

I'm glad you liked it -- I keep intending to add more audio, and will make it a New Year's resolution.

& yes, it does matter -- the way I read it is better, for sound.

Didi

I need you to record the other one too.

d.

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