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07 April 2006


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sounds like you stayed awake all night...
heard it all except the dog and newspaper...
thanks for putting it into words


I especially like the first 3 lines, and the train/rain sound.


Interesting poem. Like how you use time and then ended it with color in this one.


mm, this poem is yummy. i could feel the damp air, hear the train.


Inspiring! I especialy like the part about the geese barking.

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