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hay(na)ku
drowsing on the surface skipping like a stone sleep so shallow so thin you can see through it through the transparent minnows the narrow fish the transient ripples on this shining skin of memory & dream
drowsing on the surface skipping like
a stone sleep so shallow so
thin you can see through it
through the transparent minnows the narrow
fish the transient ripples on this
shining skin of memory & dream
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You have caught me with your words - I can feel water splashing and hear it the sound of the water being cut...
Posted by: endment | 10 April 2006 at 07:02 AM
You did an excellent job with the hay(na)ku. Great poem too.
Posted by: Cathy | 10 April 2006 at 06:35 PM
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You have caught me with your words - I can feel water splashing and hear it the sound of the water being cut...
Posted by: endment | 10 April 2006 at 07:02 AM
You did an excellent job with the hay(na)ku. Great poem too.
Posted by: Cathy | 10 April 2006 at 06:35 PM