hay(na)ku
drowsing on the
surface skipping
likea
stone sleep
so shallow sothin you can
see through
itthrough
the transparent
minnows the narrowfish the transient
ripples on
thisshining
skin of
memory & dream
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09 April 2006
NaPoWriMo ~ Day 8
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You have caught me with your words - I can feel water splashing and hear it the sound of the water being cut...
Posted by: endment | 10 April 2006 at 07:02 AM
You did an excellent job with the hay(na)ku. Great poem too.
Posted by: Cathy | 10 April 2006 at 06:35 PM