Watermark: NaPoWriMo ~ Day 8

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09 April 2006

NaPoWriMo ~ Day 8

hay(na)ku

drowsing on the
surface skipping
like

a
stone sleep
so shallow so

thin you can
see through
it

through
the transparent
minnows the narrow

fish the transient
ripples on
this

shining
skin of
memory & dream

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You have caught me with your words - I can feel water splashing and hear it the sound of the water being cut...

Posted by: endment | 10 April 2006 at 07:02 AM

You did an excellent job with the hay(na)ku. Great poem too.

Posted by: Cathy | 10 April 2006 at 06:35 PM

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