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12 July 2006

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Owen

Re readable for sure. I love the first stanza and stayed with it before reading on. I thought about my own shadows...

But what I most appreciate about this piece is that it took me by surprise, suddenly {or so it seemed to me} to move in a different direction - quite arresting.

Thanks for posting it.

Owen

Dave

Another good Snapshot, SB. Full of surprises, as Owen says.

I'm sure I've said this before, but if you ever do put together a book of these, I'll be happy to read and edit for free.

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