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06 April 2007

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Jordan Reynolds

I like the revision. The poem has been whittled down to its most essential parts.

I love the "night pockets," truly a wonderful little group of lines you have there.

I also really enjoy your haiku forms. They are delightful little poems that pack a tremendous punch.

Thanks for sharing.

-Jordan Reynolds

www.sanstimelines.blogspot.com

Dave

I really liked "reacquainting themselves with the surface." Maybe you can recycle it into another poem?

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