Where is the edge of this dream?
Elk, bears, and mountain goats
are mating in the streets. Fever,
fog, bewilderment. There is blood
evidence. This house is dense
with loss and pain. Like fog. Snow
falls, thickly, but the landscape
is bare. Women in bright dresses
cling to the wire fence. Their faces
like fog. Men kneel on the stones.
Soldiers in bright uniforms carry
dark guns through the streets.
I am watching. Brightness glimmers
through the fog. Bar the doors.
The NaPoWriMo button is from Ivy, who is also posting prompts. Yay!
Beautiful! Charming! Lovely! Thoughtful! Everything one could want for the first original poetry to celebrate its month. Was it syncronicity that lead Writer's Edge to The Edge here?
Posted by: Georganna Hancock | 02 April 2007 at 10:20 AM
Whoa! Powerful poem you got there.
Posted by: Cathy | 02 April 2007 at 06:35 PM
Let me just say WOW!
Posted by: ozymandiaz | 06 April 2007 at 05:19 AM