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20 September 2007


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what i like best about this poem is that the narrator is trying to show us something. i love that energy! and she shows us so much.


Amazing how one might say little, yet reveal much... even between the words, where lie the sighs and pain.

Old? Phffft!!

Attic magic and dusty bones, i say.

In fact, were one wont to take a (nother) request at some unknown future moment, dusty bones seems as good a prompt as any.


yes i like this the way the lines run into each other and blur meaning ...
lines i loved
i am telling you everything
it is cold here

especially slipping beneath the ice

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