Poetry Thursday/ Secrets

From the Poetry Thursday site:

For the next few weeks, several Poetry Thursday participants will take turns hosting the Thursday post on their blogs. This week, please visit jillypoet where you will be able to a) leave your comment linking to your Thursday post about poetry, b) find out next week’s prompt. Next Thursday's host will be The Red Door Studio.

I'm still working on The Love Series, but have nothing new from it to post. I do, however, have an old poem that is in line with the prompt for this week. It's one of my best poems, too.

   

Secrets

Listen. I will tell you everything. The weather is turning. 
Soon it will be time to unroll the Persian rugs and lay them
on the polished floors. 

I will hold nothing back. I am brittle, like glass; like leaves
of a tree too long without water; a cocoon, untenanted,
exposed to the sun. 

This morning I wore a jacket to walk the river path. Two crows,
in their black robes, pecked at the body of a thick green snake. 
My mother was a northerner.

She carried me across thin ice. Many times I slipped beneath
the frozen water. I never knew my father. Tomatoes are laid
on the kitchen counter,

red bulbs on the maple wood. I prepare the knife:  steel blade,
sharpening stone. I want to slice to the seedy centers without
bruising the skin. 

I loved my father. He had perfect, beautiful hands. He kept
them manicured and clean. There are reasons you must not
touch me. My grandmother

lived with God in her garden. She fed me carrots and peas,
she put white lilies by my bed. I am telling you everything. 
It is cold here. 

Birch trees bend in their white sleeves, leaves hissing in the wind. 
A blade of sun slants down, casting serrated shadows on the hard
ground. Are you listening? 

Do you understand? The dog waits, and waits, at the door. 
Yesterday, I dropped the Murano vase. It cannot be repaired. 
I cut myself on sharp, thin air.

 

Comments

[caorlee]

what i like best about this poem is that the narrator is trying to show us something. i love that energy! and she shows us so much.

[Anne]

Amazing how one might say little, yet reveal much... even between the words, where lie the sighs and pain.

Old? Phffft!!

Attic magic and dusty bones, i say.

In fact, were one wont to take a (nother) request at some unknown future moment, dusty bones seems as good a prompt as any.

[ali]

yes i like this the way the lines run into each other and blur meaning ...
lines i loved
i am telling you everything
it is cold here

evocative
especially slipping beneath the ice