red fruit: apple
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If I brought you a cloak
embroidered with stars
a staff & a crown & a steed
would you mount it?
If I laid out a carpet
from my veins of bright red
if I bled & I bled
would you walk it?
If I sent you a bird
with a song yet unheard
if it came in a cage
would you free it?
If I wove silk from corn
if I turned wheat to gold
would you wrap yourself up?
Would you count it?
If I gave you a colt
with a horn in his head
would you hold out your hand?
Would you feed it?
If I cast down my hair
with its stiff strands of grey
if I unwound the braid
would you climb it?
If I offered my head
on a carved wooden plate
if I died, if I'm dead
would you grieve it?
If I hand you an apple
from my orchard of hearts
-- it is ripe, it is red --
will you eat it?[ poem by SB ]
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This is marvelous. Thank you. Have you read anything by Marion B at Open Diary?
Posted by: Mage Bailey | 27 November 2007 at 11:32 AM
If I told you this post moved me and it was perfect, would you believe me?
You should! Smiles!
Posted by: Vernon Lun | 27 November 2007 at 03:58 PM
You wrote me a poem
a list of gifts
I found it a moment of joy
and I thank you, Fran Sbrocchi
Posted by: | 27 November 2007 at 05:09 PM
Excellent as always. Love how you use a fairy tale theme for it.
Posted by: Cathy | 27 November 2007 at 07:31 PM
That was lovely, thank you.
Posted by: Nenequesadilla | 27 November 2007 at 07:48 PM
[Addendum added in response to a reader's question about whether the poem was mine, or the photographer's. It's mine. Also, I've revised this a bit since first posting, to strengthen the verbs.]
Mage: no, I'm not familiar with this person. Link?
Vernon, Fran, Cathy & Nenequesadilla: I'm so glad you liked this. It was one of those half-conscious gifts from the ether -- just, almost, asleep, and then that insistence that I must turn on the light & pick up the notebook --
Posted by: SB | 27 November 2007 at 09:01 PM
Lovely poem. The rhythm is wonderful, especially in the final stanzas. Thank you for sharing this!
Posted by: betherann | 27 November 2007 at 09:05 PM
More questions than answers, but so thought provoking!
Posted by: SweetTalkingGuy | 29 November 2007 at 01:25 AM
I enjoyed all of this poem, particularly the last three stanzas.
Posted by: Jo | 29 November 2007 at 02:49 AM
wow!! i was all set to see like "henry wadsworth longfellow" or some thing following that one... excellent
Posted by: paisley | 29 November 2007 at 03:39 AM
Great read, both playful and poignant.
Posted by: Rob Kistner | 29 November 2007 at 04:23 AM
I read earlier in the week and this is a stronger strong version.
My favorite line: "with its stiff strands of grey" and my distinct pleasure in *not* reading "silky gold".
Posted by: ...deb | 29 November 2007 at 07:55 AM
I love the rhythm here and the way the questions lead the reader
Posted by: Crafty Green Poet | 29 November 2007 at 10:53 AM
**just, almost, asleep, and then that insistence that I must turn on the light & pick up the notebook *** I'm glad you did. This is a lovely poem.
Posted by: Tumblewords | 29 November 2007 at 12:13 PM
I love the look of this poem. It's like a stairway leading down into the heart of you!
Posted by: Linda Jacobs | 30 November 2007 at 03:40 AM