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10 July 2008

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Nathan

This is great! There's so much here -- so many wonderful phrases-- the leftover fireworks, the first mention of the reserves, making that connection that's picked up with such strength in the last stanzas. I really really like this.

Nathan

I like it so much I posted my comment twice! (no, actually that was an accident)

Sweet Talking Guy..

Great snapshot poem - like a moment frozen, a day in the life of... and the final bit, almost believing etc. Phew!

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