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25 July 2008

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niki

18" of braid! Someone will benefit greatly from your gift. And your new short hair looks great!

Cathy

Whoa! didn't realize your hair was that long!

Bev

Great poem about a huge change in your life. When I had my hair cut short (it was no where as near as long as yours) it signalled a change in my life...not a huge change like a divorce but just a change in direction.

I hope the change that you had was a positive one. And you can always put a new and exciting colour in your fabulous short hair, if you want to be rid of the grey.

-Bev

Sweet Talking Guy..

Nice writing, having your haircut can be a big step - a fresh start, perhaps.

stan ski

I like the way you shaped the poem to suit the subject.

YogaforCynics

Very cool.
I particularly like the concrete poetry aspect--that was intentional, right?

SB

Yes, the 'concrete' shape was intentional -- the only concrete poem I've written that was intended to be one from the start.

This may sound odd -- but I didn't know it was that long, either. Having it professionally braided, while still wet, straightened and, seemingly, lengthened it.

I do love the haircut, and hope for a fresh start.

jo

This is wonderful, so deftly done.

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