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04 August 2009

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Dana

Beautiful. I mean, really wonderful. It's been a great week this week at RWP. That Dorianne knows how to get the poetry party started, does she not?

How did it feel to write this? I know some of the prompts are ones you go after and have several takes on. Did this one just spill out?

Mark's Notebook

I can't tell you how much I enjoyed this. I agree with Dana. There have been so many wonderful pieces shared from this prompt...

Derrick

A lot of memories here; sights and sounds, tastes and smells. Very evocative.

sbpoet

Dana, I worked hard on this one, and I'm not actually happy with it. Too prosaic, and too long.

Mark & Derrick: thanks for coming by, & I'm glad you enjoyed it -- even if it's not my best!

Nathan

Fantastic -- I love everything about it. Your line breaks are wonderful, like the one after "fingertip." The connection between landscape and human life is wonderfully painted.

wayne

great read...and nice response to prompt

angie

I like how all the images spill out, like it happens when a person is remembering. The food images are especially striking and they tie it all together for me.

one more believer

what a wonderful post...it is a rare piece so vivid as if we are there and can see everything you have experienced....

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