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07 August 2009


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There is something tender and lyrical about this, with the static giving added "spark" in both the literal and figurative sense

Keith S. Wilson

I felt like there was a certain tension in the piece, created by the use of the electrical references.


Oh, I like this!
(dare I say--it sizzles!!)


I like that you put all three pieces together in one, sectional poem. They all have an ethereal quality, dreamlike, with, as Keith said, a certain tension throughout.

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