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22 November 2010


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Just right - cold, crystalline and with a killer final stanza.


Wow, I love it.  I love the crowd, and "This cold shawl" is awesome.  It totally takes it from being all floaty and stuff and makes it something real and touchable and silver-chilly.  The perfect set-up for snow and moon.  And what's even cooler is before the shawl it sounds all metaphorical but really it's just the true facts of human biology!  I love that.

I always feel I've received a gift when I get to read one of your poems.

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