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15 December 2010

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Ken

Or a nap :o)


And moments of revelry

Siren

Sometimes, after reading one of your poems, I feel like having a cigarette, too.

sbpoet

Don't. Even. Thinkaboutit.

James

Nice! I love those questions is part 2. There's something about well-placed questions that keep a poem going in my mind for longer than it otherwise might. This one has been on my mind since I read it yesterday.

mark

Questions, cigarettes, death and sex. What's not to like?

I quite like this.

vivienne blake

I hope death is really like that. An intriguing take on the prompt. Bravo.

hedgewitch

Well, if we have to be dead, its nice to know there are compensations like this involved. Excellent close on this one.

pamela

Well, if I have that to look forward to, I'm ready!
Well done.
Pamela

Rallentanda

I like the idea of the dead woman becoming transformed into all the the things she loves...Excellent poem!

Tumblewords

an incredibly fine read.

Victoria

There is something almost metaphysical about this...the analogy between becoming one through sex and entering into the oneness of the universe after death. Enjoyed it.

irene

I truly enjoyed how you wrote about sex and death. The second part has a soft landing.

Cynthia Short

Both of your pieces were really amazing...such interesting and unique thoughts...great!

carolee

oh, this is a great one, sb! so glad you shared it with us. lots of things i read a couple times because i enjoyed them so!

wayne

sooo much to like about this Sharon..so I will just say i LOVED it...thanks for sharing

Deb

The first poem is full and round (makes no sense, probably) as if painted with acrylic and the second sketched with charcoal. They are of the same hand, but reach different places in my head. Funny how I had to describe my reaction physically, which is simple how I responded to your poem (as if I, too, need a smoke).

The last two lines seem to overlay the "styles", to me, to great effect.

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